Tuesday, 30 June 2020
Monday, 29 June 2020
Thursday, 25 June 2020
Writing task.
Dear Mum,
Faʻafetai mum mo mea uma na e faia mo aʻu. E te leoleo lava aʻu ia o fai laʻu galuega i le fale. E te aoaoina aʻu pe faʻafefea ona fai mea. Faʻafetai ma alofa ia te oe loʻu tuafafine ma loʻu tama.
Thanks mum for all you did for me. You always watch over me doing my work at home. You teach me how to do things. Thank you and love you my sister and my dad.
From Your son.
Wednesday, 24 June 2020
The Trench.
Once all the men got in the trench it was the end for them sadly. The smell in the trench smelt very disgusting because all the stink gas from the bombs.
When the rats were silently crawling around in the trench they thought about taking the soldiers food. So they did,but when one soldier felt the rat on his foot he didn’t care. So he ignores it even though he is that scared of rats.
The feeling of the trench was feeling very mouldy so that was yuck. That trench was very damp. They had heaps of sandbags so it would be very stuffy and uncomfortable. It was too cold for the soldiers but they still handled it.
The other side was ready to attack. The rifle and sniper went off on their side. But the other side wasn’t ready to attack so they still stayed in the trench.
When their side was ready to attack they ran and hid behind the sandbags so they wouldn’t get shot. The side that wasn’t ready was ready so they grabbed the rifles,shotguns and snipers.
When the rats were silently crawling around in the trench they thought about taking the soldiers food. So they did,but when one soldier felt the rat on his foot he didn’t care. So he ignores it even though he is that scared of rats.
The feeling of the trench was feeling very mouldy so that was yuck. That trench was very damp. They had heaps of sandbags so it would be very stuffy and uncomfortable. It was too cold for the soldiers but they still handled it.
The other side was ready to attack. The rifle and sniper went off on their side. But the other side wasn’t ready to attack so they still stayed in the trench.
When their side was ready to attack they ran and hid behind the sandbags so they wouldn’t get shot. The side that wasn’t ready was ready so they grabbed the rifles,shotguns and snipers.
Monday, 22 June 2020
Friday, 19 June 2020
Thursday, 18 June 2020
Titanic Sinking Story.
Once we hit the iceberg our ship just currently kept going until we started sinking. We noticed that we started sinking by the water coming on the balcony. Also the ship just started sinking because it kept on moving not gently.
When the Titanic sank all the people on the lifeboats sadly watched their parents or strangers sink with the Titanic. Sadly I thought there were actually people crying and there was. I felt sad that all the strangers on the boat were actually sinking. It was sad how we had to go in the lifeboats and sail away.
I would rather stay in the Titanic and let someone take my spot then rather watching people sink. There were only 16 water holes that were very very huge holes. When we hit the iceberg I was terrified. All of us blame it on the captain for going too fast and not looking in front of him.
Well I kind of don’t blame him since you can’t really see in the distance because it was very dark and no moon light. The only colour you could see was pitch black and white tiny stars and planets that are very far from earth. I heard on the news 50 years later because I was like a baby when I was on the Titanic, the Titanic had separated in half and none of the body's could be seen in the water. The Titanic was all the way down at the ocean bottom and it brought back some memories on the Titanic.
When the Titanic sank all the people on the lifeboats sadly watched their parents or strangers sink with the Titanic. Sadly I thought there were actually people crying and there was. I felt sad that all the strangers on the boat were actually sinking. It was sad how we had to go in the lifeboats and sail away.
I would rather stay in the Titanic and let someone take my spot then rather watching people sink. There were only 16 water holes that were very very huge holes. When we hit the iceberg I was terrified. All of us blame it on the captain for going too fast and not looking in front of him.
Well I kind of don’t blame him since you can’t really see in the distance because it was very dark and no moon light. The only colour you could see was pitch black and white tiny stars and planets that are very far from earth. I heard on the news 50 years later because I was like a baby when I was on the Titanic, the Titanic had separated in half and none of the body's could be seen in the water. The Titanic was all the way down at the ocean bottom and it brought back some memories on the Titanic.
Wednesday, 17 June 2020
The story about the Titanic hitting the iceberg.
So me and other people decided to go for a ride from Southampton to new york. The ship’s name is called titanic. Once we were about to sail,all the passengers came on very carefully because you might fall off the steps.
We just sailed off,everyone was having a very good time as always. Two of our passengers Lee and Frederick were on the edge of the ship. Frederick looked in the distance very very far away,then he just noticed there was an iceberg! He told Lee he saw an iceberg in the distance so Lee looked as well. Lee saw it too,so they decided to warn everyone about it but first they had to go see the captain as well as me.
They straight away ran to me and said “There is an iceberg we are about to hit!” I kind of believed it so I told the crew to tell everyone on the ship. Once the crew told everyone, they didn’t have enough time for everyone to get in 20 lifeboats. When the Titanic hit the iceberg all the kids,women and some men survived and went on the lifeboats as quickly as they could. The reason that they brought some men with them was because they needed people to sail the boat somewhere.
Once the 710 people hopped into the lifeboats, sadly a lot of passengers were still on the Titanic because there was not that much space in the lifeboat. If I could’ve turned the ship around the iceberg I would,but the Titanic was so close to turning until the large iceberg hit. Everyone that survived has gone to new york or their home land and has safely returned home. Sadly some kids have lost their parents that risked their lives for their children.
Well,hope you enjoyed my story of the Titanic hitting the iceberg. Watch out for the icebergs in the water or else you know what will happen. Have a safe procced going somewhere in a ship in the same direction the Titanic went!
From, Your Captain.
We just sailed off,everyone was having a very good time as always. Two of our passengers Lee and Frederick were on the edge of the ship. Frederick looked in the distance very very far away,then he just noticed there was an iceberg! He told Lee he saw an iceberg in the distance so Lee looked as well. Lee saw it too,so they decided to warn everyone about it but first they had to go see the captain as well as me.
They straight away ran to me and said “There is an iceberg we are about to hit!” I kind of believed it so I told the crew to tell everyone on the ship. Once the crew told everyone, they didn’t have enough time for everyone to get in 20 lifeboats. When the Titanic hit the iceberg all the kids,women and some men survived and went on the lifeboats as quickly as they could. The reason that they brought some men with them was because they needed people to sail the boat somewhere.
Once the 710 people hopped into the lifeboats, sadly a lot of passengers were still on the Titanic because there was not that much space in the lifeboat. If I could’ve turned the ship around the iceberg I would,but the Titanic was so close to turning until the large iceberg hit. Everyone that survived has gone to new york or their home land and has safely returned home. Sadly some kids have lost their parents that risked their lives for their children.
Well,hope you enjoyed my story of the Titanic hitting the iceberg. Watch out for the icebergs in the water or else you know what will happen. Have a safe procced going somewhere in a ship in the same direction the Titanic went!
From, Your Captain.
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